The Cardinal Park Case - Chapters 1-3

i hope with my whole heart that he gets with clarence in the final chapter oml

100th follower ohyoh ohyoh funny 3-digits number. Great game btw 👍

Hello, I recently recorded chapter 1 of this game and I'm glad to say that I'm liking it so far! The video should come out next week so I'll let you know till then! All love ❤️❤️.

It's really good

commenting because IM EXCITED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER

I really liked this game. :)

LOOKING FORWARD TO NEW CHAPTERS 🗣🗣🗣🗣

this is,THE,BEST,CANT,WAIT,FOR,MORE,CHAPTERS!!!!

Congrats 🎊 on winning the City of Adventure jam! This is a beautiful game. Well done!

I love it soooo muchhhhh Oliver is such a character yayyyyyyy <3 <3 <3

Overall I think it's bonkers its only developed in three weeks (All three chapters?) the cg is numerous and lovely as always~

The SOUND is COOL, I love all the sound design thing. Especially the footsteps~ And I love how there's so many things we can interact with ^-^

Story is thrilling I DEFINITELY want to immediately play more and explore of what the FUCK is happening.

However, level design, if that's the correct term, is kind of confusing. For example during the cafe where I need to walk to the line to trigger the event lol, but honestly that's understandable~ It's not bad just a mini flaw!!!

There's a few minor bugs, or feature...? I don't know!!! But there's clearly some minor bugs and typo like phasing through walls~ But it doesn't really m to the a to the t to the t to the e to the r, matter~

I really love Chapter 1 and 2, although for me Chapter 3 feels a bit more light compared to the other 2~

i'm sorry you made this in 3 weeks?? how??? that's time management skills some would kill for lol. this was really great!! :>

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the vibes here are top notch. a college student who doubles as a homicide detective is such a cool idea, and oliver was super charismatic and did that concept a ton of justice! i love his stoic nature, how the game's narration conveys his thoughts, his sudden bursts of emotion (specially when he lashes out at edward in the first chapter-), his drug-induced cheerfulness when he gets kidnapped... basically everything about him lol. his obsession with solving cases made it so i never forgot i was playing a detective story. on top of that, everything feels appropiately gritty and mysterious, along with having a really funny sense of humor that i think sets this game apart from similar stories! sometimes the game veered a bit too far into silliness for me (especially considering how the moments where it focused on the darkness/tragedy of the plot where a LEGIT gut punch, like when oliver finds emma's body or when he breaks the news to her mother), but that's just personal taste and tbf i can't say i wasn't warned there'd be humor at inappropiate times haha.

like your last game, the art is SO SO GOOD UGH I WANNA EAT THIS STYLE- all the characters had REALLY great designs and all the backgrounds were REALLY pretty. once again i love how the cutscenes kinda look like comic panels? omg everything just has such a nice flair... and that's not mentioning the small details that tie everything together! the falling snow, the fading footsteps, the colored backgrounds that appear when characters have strong emotions, the dye that covers the screen whenever something horrible happens, the custom mouse cursor?!? everything comes together so beautifully; you genuinely have one of my favorite art styles i've seen in any jam game! :D and that's just the visual aspect of the presentation, because the music was also so so great and you also made it all yourself??? i'm kinda jealous ngl HAHA. the songs were fantastic for every scene they were in, whether they were atmospheric, comedic, suspenseful... this game effortlestly fires on all cylinders with its presentation!

the story was great too! it was a really cool investigation with a nice pacing that never makes the plot feel stagnant. i think it might've been a bit too... dark for me, but that's what i get for not paying attention to the warnings lmao. and hey, the characters were light and charming enough to balance out the darkness of the story haha. i've already sung my praises about oliver, but his mother was also pretty funny and entertaining (as funny and entertaining an emotionally abusive gaslighter and potential murderer can be at least-), emma was cute in her tragically shortened screentime, i hope edward rots in jail but it was funny how much of an incel he is, emma's mom made me go from laughing to crying in the span of five seconds, clock is the best character any human has ever conceived... and minor characters like abbott, the two girls at the park or the kidnappers are still super memorable and charming, which is really impressive considering how little they talk! and every character aids the story in their own way and makes everything feels really well put together.

there were some things i didn't love; like i said the silliness of some scenes kinda took me out of the story and i wish it was a bit toned down (again, that's just personal taste tho). and some puzzles were kinda frustrating to figure out, i pretty much got through the forest bit with sheer luck, and i spent a pretty long time trying to find the flowers i needed for emma's mom (istg that potted plant in the first floor was taunting me-). and i think the mother being related to the murders was a tad obvious? maybe making her mental instability more subtle would've helped make the reveal she's involved in all this be more impactful. that's just me idk, reveals being "obvious" or not is one of the most subjective things in mystery stories so ignore me if you want lol.

overall i really loved this game!! had too many memorable moments to count, and i'm really intrigued to find out what happens next! :D

Just commenting to say I love this game!

Hello there. This game was a very nice change of pase

Spoilers.

There arent that many games made in RPG Maker that take me more than 1 day to complete. I think I just like looking at every nook and cranny. Liked to story. Nothing bad to say about it really and doesnt really happen alot for me. (Even my friend I was in a disc call with told me I sounded much more excited while playing it). Thats true. Nothing makes me happier then a good told story. The walking looked a bit wanky though and ofcourse the wall and snowman that i already told you about.

Final thoughts.

Mostly great job I would say. I would probably look over the game for some bugs you might missed but besides that I got nothing else to say.

Hope this helps. Keep it up

Hello, I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed the game and I was wondering if you would allow me to translate it into Brazilian Portuguese. I see a lot of potential for it to gain an audience that is interested in games of this style.

I did Chapters 1-3 in a single night. I have some questions and feel some things could have been done a little differently but really liked this regardless. 

I totally loved playing this! i can't wait for the 4th chapter :)!

A great game with a very interesting story and characters design ,I hope to know the rest of the story very soon.

I only played the first chapter. I'ma play the others separately but I am having a good time with this so far

Hello and good evening! I immediately downloaded your game the moment I saw a notification on itch lol, there's so much in this game that it's amazing to see it was made in only 3 weeks, I didn't expect to see more of your art and stories this soon and it has been fun playing through the game!

Spoilers:

I was wondering if there's any phone number that you can use with the landline phone in the mother's bedroom? Or is it gonna be used in later chapters?

Even though there are 2 more chapters to expect, I think the player can quite guess that the mother has something to do with the murder case of the poor barista girl (and the case of Mrs. Barrette even), and considering the mother's behaviors towards Oliver, I may make a dumb conclusion here but she is obsessed with taking care of his son, right? God I hope that won't escalate into something more suggestive (or will it? But either way that's not a problem or anything).

And why are half of the characters in this game so thirsty bruh 😭 That Edward dude literally wants to get it on with a corpse, the 2 sisters blush when Oliver just simply takes out his trenchcoat and that one goon wants to dress Oliver up like a goth girl and sell him 😭 (but ngl Oliver has potential). I just expected everyone in the game to be mean and maybe crazy but they caught me off-guard every time lol, though I feel very bad for Mrs. Greenwood, she deserves better imo.

Anyway, I'm looking forward to playing the next chapters! I hope more people will play your game soon, especially Clock, hopefully he won't miss it this time lmao.